Tuesday, 22 November 2011

Dolby

I really like the main construction, although the song has no 'major' narrative, it kind of builds up that the girl is killing herself?! Does she get out the bath?! if so, maybe chose a different combination of shots to show that at the end?

Dolby

some nice ancillary work; check that the key details are readable and bold.

Magazine Advert Draft 5











Monday, 14 November 2011

Mrs D

I really like the front and back covers of your digipak. Your inserts are also successful on their own. However, they are very similiar. You need to remember that this is for an album. How are you creating a view of your artist and showing other tracks on the album? Get some audience feedback to help you. Take some more pictures that would work for the other tracks.

Magazine Advert Draft 3




Tuesday, 8 November 2011

Mrs D

I really like the composition of your back cover and your use of font and mes. Think carefully about the framing of the front cover. Does it need a bit of cropping and should the feet be chopped off?